Keilah H.

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Did that leave you with more questions or answer some?

That answers enough questions. Although I guess I have one more. Is all this worldbuilding and character stuff new? I’m curious to know how the novella is coming along, what with this recent disclosing of information.

@loopylin @keilah-h

Yeah, it’s cool how many different ways the…[Read more]

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Lucille

Lucy started, looking from Mel to the door. It had changed without the rest of them noticing. The stains of mud on the door made it look as if it belonged outside, pulled from a backyard or a porch.

Food sounded good. Lucy’s heart felt tired, in a good way, but that meant her body was tired too. She was a l…[Read more]

Cool little thing.

So last night I wrote a scene that has been in my head where Baron’s heart literally stops. You probably all know how it goes where you write something, then add something to it that you weren’t planning on but somehow makes so much sense?

That was this.

In the scene, just before Baron dies, his connection to the wind snaps.…[Read more]

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Mellissa

“Can we go to the kitchen now? I’m hungry.” Mel pointed to the door that they had come in from, but it had now changed. It was wooden, and had sun bleached paint that was starting to peel. The bottom had an unused cat door and a few splashes of dried mud from the rain. Mel recognized it. It was the door into…[Read more]

@keilah-h

LOL hearing the slang in Lucy’s world from her is cute.

😛 Many of the people living around Lucy are young men who work in the factories or the fields, and she sometimes talks with them when they’re in the soup kitchens. I still haven’t decided how different the Outer Fields teenage culture is from the more populated city areas…[Read more]

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LOLLL Soldier is something special.

@whalekeeper

Why can’t Gabriel leave the island? Are there crazy storms that make it impossible to sail away? Or is it the demon monsters that get in the way?

The island is in a state of isolationism that started 200 years ago because of the rise of the monsters. So yeah, the monsters are the r…[Read more]

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(Perhaps that is a weird thing to congratulate someone for. No matter.)

It makes sense, I don’t mind it! Just don’t say that to someone who’s scared of aging XD.

Thank you!

So she might know places beyond the island? Gabriel would surely ask her about that, even if she doesn’t know about them.

Oh yes, she knows quite a bit about t…[Read more]

@keilah-h

(i wrote this when I was angry about someone calling me an AI for the THIRD FLIPPING TIME on the internet so that’s why she’s screaming internally lol)

Lol, so that explains why Huntress was angry.

Azalea

Huntress sat down on the stones and gave a death stare towards the man. “Now what? You gonna send us all into a pit of doom too?”…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Oh yeah, that’s the normalest thing for your characters. Not weird in the slightest.

Probably literally no body besides me was waiting for this for so long, but Gabriel finally has a girlfriend.

Her name is Lillian, she’s a race of merfolk.

Gabriel has had so many girls have secret crushes on him, and bro has just been oblivious to all of them. It’s genuinely crazy. The only reason he even noticed with Lillian is because she…[Read more]

@whalekeeper So accurate LOL.

@loopylin @keilah-h (funny thing, I keep typing your KP tag on Unvale and then confusing myself when your username doesn’t pop up XD.)

Gabriel

“I’m supposed to name it?” He questioned, peering at it in his free hand. For a second he had thought they were an earring until Lucy gave an explanation. “I never name…[Read more]

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who’s room should we do next?

Mel

“I’ll call him Paul… Junior.”  Mel fumbled around with the pin for a moment, trying to put it on without letting go of Gabriel’s hand. Eventually she gave up and put it in her pocket.

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The fact that Soldier has kids is what sends me.

Lucille

“Its name is Gryllus rubens,” Lucy explained. “Or Gryllus texensis. But… that’s just what I was trying to make. If you think it looks like a… another species, you can, er… call it anything you want.”

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Lucille

As the adults checked on sleepy Mel, Lucy had an idea. She wandered over to her desk – a small, ash-colored piece of furniture with all of her papers and her typewriter stacked on the side. It was much neater in comparison with the mess underneath it.

A part of her wanted to sit down and do her homework; do…[Read more]

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Also Lucy and Mel, if you two keep this up, Gabriel’s going to go full dad.

Poor guy isn’t going to want to leave the labyrinth. Or help Lucy magically grow up again. Or… idk, he just won’t like it if he can’t keep an eye on these girls.

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Gabriel

Gabriel gently squeezed Mel’s hand, casting Huntress a quick look as if he was horrified she would deny a child’s hand like that. He smiled at Lucy, before looking down at Mel. “Did you sleep well? Don’t fall asleep on your feet, okay?”

I know, it’s short. Also Lucy and Mel, if you two keep this up,…[Read more]

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It is so fun having a child character to confuse the adults with hehe

(also, sorry if I interrupted the moment y’all were having)

Melissa

Mel looked up at Huntress, frowned confusedly, and then immediately walked over to Gabriel and held his hand.
She intended to hold somebody’s hand. That way, she wouldn’t get left…[Read more]

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Melissa Anne

Mel tottled into the room, squinting at everything from behind a few tangled strands of red hair. There was a red mark on her cheek from sleeping on her side, and her hair was a bit more frizzy on that side as well. She immediately planted herself next to Huntress and held her hand without looking at her.…[Read more]

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Azalea

Huntress got to her feet. “First answer my question: where are the others? We came here with three men, two humans and an Argonite. They have to be here somewhere.”

“They are… Don’t worry too much about them. I assume my master is letting others have fun with them, or something like that.” The Terror gestured to a few large…[Read more]

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Lucille

Gabriel said a lot of things, and Lucy struggled to follow everything he was saying. The woman in the group of fighter people – Huntress – joined in, and added more words. It was all very confusing. But at least Gabriel was holding her hand.

And one thing stuck.

Lucy could do good things. She was just new to…[Read more]